These days, it seems that more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. This
raise certain question about the integration of newcomers into society. Although there are
valid arguments to the contrary, in this paper I will argue that it is the responsibility of
immigrants to adapt to accepted rules of behavior in their adopted country, both written and
unwritten. The reasons for this are twofold.
Firstly, it is vitally important that newcomers observe the laws of their adopted country for
the sake of social order. Imagine the chaos that would ensure if people refused to drive on the
same side of the road. It is, therefore, necessary for all-immigrants to ensure that they observe
the law in their new country regardless of any differences to laws in their home country. Two
further instances of practices which are permitted in some countries but prohibited in others
are the possession of firearms and gambling.
Secondly and more importantly, though, in order to maintain societal cohesion it is essential
that newcomers respect the social norms of their adopted country. Of course, having a
mixture of different cultures and traditions gives a country color and vibrancy; however, I
would contend that too much cultural diversity undermines a society by alienating people
from each other. It is my belief that similarities unite people, whereas differences have a
tendency to divide. A strong society is a homogeneous society with shared values and goals.
By way of conclusion, I believe that this issue is likely to become even more important in the
future as border between countries become increasingly blurred. It, therefore, demands out
further consideration.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 73
- People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less?What effect does it have in on an individual and the society? 78
- Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
- completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job on the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
- completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job on the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39338235294 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85701034472 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3223684132 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.785714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287993096111 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082492470701 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071305220349 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676895920421 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621496699567 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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