Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The exponential growth rate of miscarriage around the world has caused many controversies whether this phenomenon should be banned or behave like a legal action. While there is solid logic behind pass a law to allow women to make a decision about this issue by themselves, some opponents are opposed to it.

First of all, never has it been painless to have a child for some people in some situations. In fact, due to the fact that making a baby is a result of having sex, which is an enjoyable activity for individuals to do, there should be many unwanted children. For example; they could be either universities' student or people who have many financial problems. By banning abortion, their life would be ruined and they give birth to a child who will be through many pains and unfilled needs.

Secondly, rapists are another reason for legal miscarriage, which demand profound consideration. For instance, those who are raped by someone and get pregnant in that horrible incident would have no chance to remove what's on their womb without a legislation for legal abortion. This could be even worst when there are rapists not just one rapist. Therefore, all the logic will stand for passing a law to allow women to make the decision for what has happened to them.

To sum up, although there might be some opponents of legal abortion, there is always a reason behind miscarriage for women. I once again reaffirm my position in this matter and vote for legal abort law.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'universities'' or 'university's'?
Suggestion: universities'; university's
...dren. For example; they could be either universities student or people who have many financi...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...incident would have no chance to remove whats on their womb without a legislation for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in fact, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55329957425 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3764898667 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138891074602 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556433020911 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030021635806 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928212243102 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036109143409 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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