It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples.
Many organizations work get affected due to the high number of aged employees. This is because older Peoples are not as energetic as they are used to be in their younger times. As a result of their slow actions, the deadlines in their key reserved areas get unachieved thus affecting their performance. For example, as per a recent survey, an increasing number of companies these days are setting the age of 55 as retirement age so that the young generation can take their place.
It is also difficult for older Peoples to come up with some creative ideas. This is to say since aged people are already in their tough times and may be dealing with their medical conditions, it is, therefore, hard to expect them to come up with some creative ideas. Whereas, the young generation these days are highly under the influence of technology which assists them to develop something which eases a particular task. For example, as per an article published in Time of India many teenagers these days are making effective use of the internet in the field of research to develop new inventions.
In conclusion, I pen down stating, that higher number of adults in comparison to the young people can be seen as a negative development since it will disrupt the efficiency and effectiveness of company performance and this also seems to resist the possibilities of future inventions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to being'.
Suggestion: used to being
...eoples are not as energetic as they are used to be in their younger times. As a result of ...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...em to come up with some creative ideas. Whereas, the young generation these days are hi...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the possibilities of future inventions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87606837607 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77080320978 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568376068376 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2860783446 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.777777778 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12887084538 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540577725545 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557067366891 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098649024437 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537010459274 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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