It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools.
What do you think?
It is often thought that exercise plays a vital role in the life of children and youngsters, so it is also suggested that physical education and sport must be part of the school curriculum for all students. In my opinion, I believe that it would be beneficial for students in many aspects.
The first and foremost benefit is the improved physical health and fitness level. Students will be spending a minimum of one hour exclusively for sports activities in the school on a daily basis which would keep them fit and disease-free. Apart from this, they will learn about a balanced diet, functioning of the human body parts and advantages of regular exercise.
Another obvious benefit is the development of leadership quality and team spirit. In other words, when students will play different games on the playground then they would come to know about the fact that how to play in a group by co-ordinating each other and how to lead a team.
Finally, some of the talented students may adopt their career as a sportsman. Educational institutes are the best platform for the players at an early age. There are a number of schools which motivate their students to perform well in their games and also provide scholarships to the talented players.
In conclusion, subjects such as physical education and sport are advantageous for pupils in terms of having a healthy life, development of leadership and team spirit qualities and adoption of a particular sports activity as a profession.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, so, then, well, apart from, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.972 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80348640089 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5927893079 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2245631547 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789306901714 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767000692363 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123559993916 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936091179943 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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