It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be.
Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought
closer together.
Include any relevant examples from your experience.
With changing lifestyle, the bond between our family members is progressively weakening as the trend of living in a nuclear family takes over the orthodoxical joint family arrangement. This essay will discuss the reasons for this change and also suggest solutions to this problem.
Many of us have migrated away from our families to different cities in order to look for a source of livelihood. In order to earn a better living, we are forced to leave our families and settle in foreign places for employment. In addition to this, increased competition in the job environment has forced us to give most of our time at work leading to an improper work life balance. Due to this, we are not able to frequently interact with our family members. In my case, I am only able to meet my loved ones only on a few occasions during my Diwali or Christmas holidays as a result of a hectic work life. Hence, our bonds with our family members are not as strong as they used to be as a result of limited interaction with them.
Families could be brought closer together by promoting work life balance. By making time for our family out of our busy work life, we will be able to frequently meet our family members and strengthen our social ties with them. Furthermore, in order to evade the need to travel afar for job opportunities, self employment may be promoted. For instance, many run their family businesses in order to locally earn a living without the need to migrate away from their families.
In conclusion, our social ties with our families are weakening as a result of poor work life balance and increased migration to new places in better living. This can be resolved by giving time to our family and creating self employment locally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: FEW_OCCASIONS[1]
Message: Use simply 'occasionally'
Suggestion: occasionally
...am only able to meet my loved ones only on a few occasions during my Diwali or Christmas holidays ...
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Line 9, column 353, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun run seems to be countable; consider using: 'many runs'.
Suggestion: many runs
...ployment may be promoted. For instance, many run their family businesses in order to loc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, then, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72222222222 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63664537667 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503267973856 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0929771706 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.214285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196133926194 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881677581776 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051841029464 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147958569653 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392529724335 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.