In the past families are closer to each other than what we see today. Families used to invite each other to their houses and spend their free time together.
As I consider in these years it is obvious that families are become alone or there are a few relation between them .for example in my family 10 years ago we alwaye saw our reletives (aunts, uncles,…) in the weekends in our houses or theirs. Sometimes we altogether went to parks to be in nature.
We played volleyball with our cousins and nephews or rode our bicycles in the park there were not only a lot of fun for children but also there were such a perfect moments for parents
Now a days these things have changed so quickly. Technology is developing so fast and social communication replaced to our smart phones and tablets, people can easily see each other by video calls, text by sms, say their request via emails. I some cases children and their parents in same house do not have any contacts just for meals can speak face to face without any digital disturbtion.
In conclusion, unless growing technology is perfect for industries or improve international comminications but as I mention that it brings less and less social activities for families.
- Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? give reasons and relevant examples. 56
- Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. 61
- more and more students choose to go to another country for their higher education. do u think the benefits outweigh the problems associated with it? 78
- It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience. 65
- You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor.Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:•introduce yourself•describe your plans for the party•invite your neighbor to 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun relation seems to be countable; consider using: 'few relations'.
Suggestion: few relations
...amilies are become alone or there are a few relation between them .for example in my family ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...or there are a few relation between them .for example in my family 10 years ago we...
^^
Line 2, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...e alwaye saw our reletives aunts, uncles,… in the weekends in our houses or theirs...
^^
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to be in nature. We played volleyball with our cousins and nephews or rode our...
^^
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'moment'?
Suggestion: moment
...dren but also there were such a perfect moments for parents Now a days these things ha...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ere such a perfect moments for parents Now a days these things have changed so quickly. T...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...such a perfect moments for parents Now a days these things have changed so quickly. T...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt phones and tablets, people can easily see each other by video calls, text by s...
^^
Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...children and their parents in same house do not have any contacts just for meals ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71495327103 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57362968278 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640186915888 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8647905319 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.125 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107900179263 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521745145909 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039229023134 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549577228409 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522077850628 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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