Compared to the past, the number of young people who decide to continue their education overseas are increasing alternatively. Although, there are some negative points, I believe that the positive side outweigh. In this essay, I am going to clarify advantages and disadvantages about this topic.
On the one hand, some thinks that studying in other countries brrings so many profits for international students. Firstly, immigration for undergraduate and graduate studies is a significant chance for pupils to live independently, for instance, they learn to do their daily responsibilities, washing cloths, cooking food and so on. Secondly, it is an exciting experience to get familiar with new culture and language. Thirdly, connections with other students from different countries improve their social communications. Finally, these students often have more offers for their future careers in famous companies.
On the other hand, other people disagree with studying abroad, according to them, abandoning homeland has negative aspects. One of the reason is that young individuals have to live without their parents' supports, which can mentally brings lots of stress and uneasy to them. The other reason is that, adopting in strange environment usually is tough for some of them, and this issue effects their concentration for studying. Due to this fact, they can not express their best abilities which easily ruin their future opportunities.
In conclusion, it is undeniable, these kind of preferences have their own advantages and disadvantages. Dispite all the drawbacks, in my opinion, attending programs in superb universities and industriliazed countries surely surpass those of in your own countries with limited and not well-equiped universities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67169811321 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14610633133 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633962264151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4443319775 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23681212193 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720152777741 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482121095896 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121384573209 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767275752278 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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