it has been noted that people prefer to live in rented apartments. What are the advantages and the disadvantages of this trend?
There arises no question over the verity of the statement that people tend to live in rented apartments rather than buying the same. This phenomenon has an array of plus points to offer, accompanied by some negatives that shall be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, convenience is the best outcome when people stay in rented apartments. Firstly, the liberty to relocate from one place to another without much botheration of time is the most attractive advantage. To illustrate, people can easily leave the house once they are transferred to another location. Secondly, all the burden of renovation and maintenance is on the shoulders of the landlord, thereby making it economical for the tenants. More than that, people can choose to live in a place they are interested in, and thus, explore the world.
On the other hand, there is are lots of worries associated when people have no permanent housing, as they can be asked to leave the house anytime. Hence, the concept of a happy home is hindered to some extent where people can’t design their living place according to their wish and have to live in the fear of uncertainty. Also, buying a house can be an investment for the future and thus installments of mortgage, to buy a house, seem a better option when compared to paying rent every month. Not only this, humans find it difficult to adjust at an alien place once accustomed to a particular environment. Hence, the emotional disturbances, particularly for children, are not a fear in the case.
In conclusion, renting an apartment offers flexibility in terms of finances, time and choice of the place. However, the fear of insecurity and emotional disturbances prevail when there is no permanent roof on the head.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95254237288 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80780297402 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4887732186 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.357142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147339717644 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503158496097 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479420557433 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089152408215 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348405378056 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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