It is important that we maintain and protect the beautiful building of the past, even if it is expensive for countries to do so.
Do you agree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words
The Historical monuments are remembrance of historic times and cultural heritage, due to its artistic, historical, political, technical or architectural importance. There are some denizens who believes that it is necessary to protect and preserve the conventional places of the country. This essay will argue as to why it is important to preserve and restore the archaeological place of the country.
To embark on, the traditional places are a means of attraction for tourists and archaeologists who want to study and praise the architectural history of the nation. This helps in the inflow of knowledge and foreign currency and thus, contributes to the economic and social development of the country. Moreover, apart in the growth of the tourism industry, it creates many job possibilities that the people can avail. For example, the Taj Mahal in Agra attracts foreigners from all over the world which in turn creates a lot of employment prospects for tourist guides, travel agencies and so on. Furthermore, Preservation of the old buildings plays an important cultural role in cultivating the pride of the heritage and past making us unique in the world. It helps the community to understand the period of glory and struggle of their predecessors. For Instance, the Roman Colosseum not only depict the outstanding architecture but it also provides a realistic vision of the history
On the contrary, taking care of the historical beauty of the country puts a burden on the government, as they have to allocate a huge amount of money for its protection and preservation. This puts pressure on the citizens who will have to pay high taxes for the reconstruction of the monuments. Additionally, most of the land is occupied by the archaeological places, as a result, to build new buildings and houses, forest areas are cleared and this adversely affects the environment. For instance, according to the research done by world heritage organisation a lot of money of the country is spend to restore the monuments and the preserve their beauty
To conclude, I strongly agree that the long-established places and monuments are the roots of our beliefs and religion and it is mandatory for the administration to safeguard and conserve these historic locations and thus maintain the aesthetic and artistic beauty of the country
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 595, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...sation a lot of money of the country is spend to restore the monuments and the preser...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18037135279 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15290346489 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535809018568 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.8587698754 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.230769231 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184991962569 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054431596681 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040611465779 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103859769492 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409889586564 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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