It is important that we maintain and protect the beautiful building of the past, even if it is expensive for countries to do so.
Do you agree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words
The Historical monuments are remembrance of historic times or cultural heritage, due to its artistic, historical, political, technical or architectural importance. Some denizens believe that it is necessary to protect and preserve the conventional places of the country. This essay will argue as to why it is important to preserve and restore the archaeological place of the country.
To embark on, the traditional places are a means of attraction for tourists and archaeologists who want to study and praise the architectural history of the nation. This helps in the inflow of knowledge and foreign currency and thus, contributes to the economic and social development of the country. Moreover, apart from the growth of the tourism industry, it has created more job opportunities for the people. For example, the Taj Mahal in Agra has attracted a lot of foreigners from all over the world and this creates a lot of employment prospects for tourist guides, travel agencies and so on. Furthermore, Preservation of the old buildings plays an important cultural role in cultivating the pride of the heritage and past making us unique in the world. It helps the community to understand the period of glory and struggle of their predecessors and helps to protect the culture and customs of the country. For Instance, the Roman Colosseum in Rome not only depict the outstanding architecture but it also used as a stadium for gladiators fighting with a capacity of 50000 viewers
On the contrary, the government has to allocate a huge amount of money to protect and preserve the monuments eventually it puts pressure on the citizens who will have to pay high taxes in order to reconstruct the monuments. Additionally, most the area of the land is occupied by the archaeological places, in order to build new buildings and houses, forest areas are cleared and this affects the environment of the territory. For instance, according to the research done by world heritage organisation a lot of money of the country is spend to restore the monuments and the preserve their beauty
To conclude, I strongly agree that the long-established places and monuments are the roots of our beliefs and religion and it is mandatory for the administration to safeguard and conserve these historic locations and thus maintain the aesthetic and artistic beauty of the country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, so, thus, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12727272727 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09982997265 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.382493918 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.5 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0833333333 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186849412415 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596891465132 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363150926691 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998594058904 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465469060717 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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