It is often argued that technology has distanced humans from their traditional customs, which makes it difficult to enjoy both the tradition's and technology at the same time. I believe, even though many cultural activities like social gatherings have been lost or ignored due to technological advancement, the role that technology plays in bringing people together, be it virtually helps a lot to stay connected with each other.
Every country and religion have their own traditions to follow. It is really important to pass on these customs to the new generation, in order to preserve it. Also, celebrating one's own culture makes them to feel close to their religion. For instance, people in India celebrate Diwali to remember the victory of God over the Evil. Apart from religious importance, knowing traditional culture makes a person wiser by knowing the lifestyle, language as well as the other traditional medicinal uses that can benefit the society when in need.
On the other hand, the advancement of technology has affected the celebration of traditional customs across the globe. In the technological era, people have become less socially active, even their meetings have gone virtual instead of in person meets. Due to the busy lifestyle, people tend to take a time off during festive season for their own refreshment and do not give importance to their traditional customs. As the technology has made it easy to book travel tickets like air, rail and hotel bookings, easy on the internet, individuals with just a click can books their trip easily. Many people in Ahmedabad books a 7 day trip during Janmashtami festival celebrated in memory of Lord Krishna, as they get entire week off at work, so people make maximum of it to enjoy themselves.
In conclusion, as the easy availability of things due to technology, people are getting away from their customs and traditions. It can be said it is difficult to co exist with tradition and technology, however one can manage time to learn the traditional culture in order to preserve it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'book'
Suggestion: book
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06194690265 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82256032538 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569321533923 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0733881661 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.571428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164169999272 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601074723129 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402808997299 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10854766709 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302024845447 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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