It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today, it is thought that traditional rituals or social customs can disappear because of the ever-advancing technology. This is explained by the argument that folklore and tech are opposite poles that repel each other. I firmly disagree with this inaccurate statement since, by contrary, thanks to the cutting-edge tech the world is witnessing that our traditions, values and cultures are stronger than ever before.
First, the Internet is the modern and most used vehicle that people use to teach, learn and be updated. There are thousands websites that offer detail information about history, traditions, historical places, etc., of any country or nation, in form of videos, electronic texts, documentaries, etc. Wikipedia is a good example of this kind of site, which contains accurate info about almost anything, and the best of all is free.
Second, many internet platforms, such as YouTube, Periscope, and the like, are used to forecast local festivities, religious mass, worldwide. Moreover, those people who have not the opportunity to visit in person museums, historical buildings, can easily be there virtually, just by paying a small fee, they can enjoy a virtual visit to those places. In Spain, for instance, its famous and well-known The Prado Museum, offers a virtual guided visit through its official website.
To sum up, although it is true that technology has become a greater distractor, particularly for teenagers, stealing a considerable amount of time, it is also true that has helped the world by allowing the information, knowledge and cultures to reach anyone. Thus, our sacred and beloved traditions will not be forgotten at all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, second, so, thus, well, for instance, kind of, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33079847909 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86556331419 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669201520913 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2222241039 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.454545455 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805365855771 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273462312659 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326102172917 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0455658389045 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308627287948 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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