It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.
What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?
What solution can you offer to deal with this situation?
Although most of the time it is considered that the teenager crimes would be because of the violence content of the media, I do not completely agree. In my view, other major factors have mainly affected the increase of the juvenile adequacies. Now we will discuss the other reasons and the ways of preventing the increase of this kind of crimes.
It is obvious that family and friends play the most important role of the children's growth. If teenagers were left alone by their parents or were influenced by peer pressure, undoubtedly, they would tend to commit a crime in some situation. In these recent decades, it costs so much to bring children up, so, both of the parents has to work, so children found no observation and somehow committing the crime would be an amazing or funny action which they do when they are alone. Children needs attention. On the other hand, busy parents do not spend time with their children and as a result of that, children have a tendency to spend most of their time with their friends, this causes that they are influenced by their friends more easily and consequently, bad friends might lead them to commit a crime. Generally, two major reasons might affect the increase of juvenile adequacies namely, family inattention and bad friends.
The most significant solution to resolve the massive increase of youth crime is parents' observation. Parents should make interesting plans for their children's leisure time and spend most of their free time which each other. Furthermore, parents should guarantee the intimacy in the family and try to be such a close friend with their children. To sum up, parents and their method for bringing up their children is the most important part of a teenager growth and might specify the whole path of their life.
In conclusion, many people believe that violence in the media is the important factor of raising the crime commitment in the youth; however, we debate that another important reason exists.
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'as to', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'as a result', 'in my view', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247282608696 0.247107183377 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.138586956522 0.155533422707 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0842391304348 0.0946595960268 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.054347826087 0.0501214627716 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0625 0.0437548338989 143% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.116847826087 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0271739130435 0.0403226058552 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54202547538 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0217391304348 0.0326793684256 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0054347826087 0.00163938923432 332% => OK
Determiners: 0.111413043478 0.0861772015684 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0244565217391 0.021408717616 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00815217391304 0.011925033212 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1982.0 1933.35771543 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 316.048096192 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91641791045 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34328358209 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259701492537 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170149253731 0.203846283523 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0925373134328 0.137316102897 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54202547538 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522388059701 0.56093040696 93% => OK
Word variations: 54.914600512 60.7387585426 90% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.9285714286 20.7743622355 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.371466034 49.517814964 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.571428571 127.492653851 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7743622355 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.814263465372 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 49.8987206823 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.53191489362 1.69124875643 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463927425918 0.332605444948 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127624579604 0.102741220458 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0580847751758 0.0668466124924 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.588543032687 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.214139568609 0.148594505496 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215138887169 0.134430193775 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12234992188 0.0742795772207 165% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.358725056661 0.324371583561 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.106431665212 0.0638462369009 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.359572683075 0.228012699653 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703684562075 0.058150111329 121% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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