it is sometime said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society.do you agree or disagree?

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it is sometime said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society.
do you agree or disagree?

Youth should be got married before 30 years old, because some people believe that it can be worthy for them and for their society. In this essay I am going to discuss this issue and give my personal view.
When people are still single in the third decade of their life, They do not have enough energy to make their common life. In addition, they do not have enough motivate as they were younger. Similarly they gradually will be more strict to choose their partner. When they get older, They expect more perfect criterias from their partner. So, getting married becomes more difficult for them.Another disadvantages is about the age difference between parents and children, It will be more and more. Whereas it makes many problems such as misunderstanding and losing parents because of their old age and maybe die.I believe that one of the most demerit of late marriage is increasing moral corruption. Because single people are more free furthermore, they do not have any family responsibility. They might be tended to do unethical behaviors more than married people.
On the other hand, when youth get married in younger age, they do not have enough ability nor experience to accept responsibility of common life. Moreover, maybe they do not have awareness for suitable choice. perhaps their marriage leads to divorce.
Consequently, I almost agree with getting married under 30 years old, but the things should needs more attend is preparing some valid train for youth to increase their awareness to make a best decision for choose their husband. In addition creating comfort and calmness for single people is necessary in each society to encourage them to get married.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, still, third, whereas, in addition, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00358422939 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56311749743 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562724014337 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3218246369 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332164037365 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115539421896 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796210064164 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226547606758 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631199528669 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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