It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30,as this is best both for the individual and for the society.Do you agree or disagree?
It is often said that people must be pursuaded to tie a knot before the age of 30,as it is in the best interest for both the individual and society.I tend to believe that nowadays such constraints have no place in societies, as a person sholuld only get married when he is financialy stable and mature enough to handle the responsibilities that come with this fortunate event.
Certainly, marriage is a long term commitment which requires perfect understanding and emotional attachment between two individuals.Hence ,a person must take his time to find the suitable match for himself, who can act as a pillar of strengh during weal and woe of life. Evidence to this is provided by my neighbour couple who got married around the age of 35 years, yet they walk shoulder to shoulder in ups and downs of life because of the strong bond and love they have for each other .
Financial stability is another pillar on which the marriage stands, so it is imperative to ingratiate ourself into the society in terms of money. For instance, recently one of my colleagues got divorced because he failed to bear the expenses of family.Hence , rather than worrying about the age to get married , a person must be scupulous regarding the factors affecting this serious relationship.
To conclude,I firmly believe that age is just a number and people should only get married when they are able to manage the household expenses and are sensible enough to be sounding board for one another.
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- It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30,as this is best both for the individual and for the society.Do you agree or disagree? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86507936508 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81202449097 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615079365079 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0713647603 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 204.333333333 106.682146367 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.0 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298233260257 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129351830724 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099565708944 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175713419904 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081963834374 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.0946893788 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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