Juvenile delinquency is increasing and becomes more and more serious in the modern society. What are the reasons? And give some solutions to this problem.
These few decades have seen an upsurge in the number of young criminals, which is the most challenging problems facing the society. My essay will discuss about some of the main causes and suggest some efficacious solutions to this problem.
First and foremost, there is no denying that the lack of family education is the most pivotal reason of juvenile delinquency. It is crucial for parents to teach moral and ethical values to their children with the aim of helping them understanding the right things, and being capable of avoiding social evils. Nevertheless, nowadays, more and more parents tend to make a lot of money for their kids to supply them with a wealthy life and forget the importance of spending quantity time with their children. As a consequence, teenagers are more likely to turn to a career of crime, fall in the wrong hands or get involved with bad company when they try to seek attention from somebody in preference to their parents.
Furthermore, individual aspect is also another motive for crime. Youngsters’ behaviours are exerted by their genetic, emotional, cognitive, physical and social aspects. They are unable to help the gene they are born with along with the ability to learn. Young people, who are behind others academically, have been proven to prone to criminal behaviours. Besides, being an adolescent is a tough period when they always have to face with hardships in life due to a plethora of physical and social problems. Many of them have to deal with their emotions, their conflicts with friends, and prejudices from the society or even from their own family, which can lead to depression, frustration and crime. They tend to refuse to follow the proper rules, be defiant to their parents and rebel to resist with all of their difficulties.
Therefore, people should take proactive actions to tackle this issue as soon as possible. Initially, it is integral to encourage parents to keep an eye on their kids, and take the responsibility to fight against any odds in their personalities. Parents ought to engage in more activities with their children to understand them, to communicate with them and be a friend who is always besides them with a view to helping them overcome their adversities. Besides, it is also essential for teachers and schools to pay more attention to their students to detect any abnormal signs from them and educate them more thoroughly.
To sum up, I believe that family accompanied by personal aspects is two main cause of this problem and parents as well as schools need to take measures to avoid breeding future offenders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 41.998997996 188% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98853211009 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7490156321 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552752293578 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3632591841 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111697146796 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385909393148 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487393466157 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079092177526 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551118699635 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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