Land pollution’s causes
People across the globe have faced a number of problems owing to land pollution. It is considered a critical issue these days. There are two major causes.
The first one is agricultural cultivation. With the growing human population, the demand for food has increased considerably, causing the overuse of chemical elements that have resulted in the poisoning of soil. Farmers, such as, often use highly toxic fertilizers and pesticides to get rid of wipe out insects, and fungi from their crops. Consequently, chemicals on land possibly make the ecosystem unappealing to the survivals of creatures within the interactive food chain. Furthermore, the extinction of certain species and biomagnification, are going to overthrow the balance of nature much.
In addition, another primary cause is urbanization. Obviously, due to overpopulation and immigration movements from the countryside to the metropolitan, many of construction activities are taking place, which has led to large waste articles such as debris, wood, metals and plastics outside any buildings or factories under the construction. According to estimates from the Chinese Academy of Sciences, soil polluted by heavy metals amounts to 20 million hectares. With the rise in urbanization and industrialization, the production of municipal solid waste has increased by 9% annually.
To sum up, land pollution causes immense damage covering all possible aspects. For this reason, raising people’s awareness of protecting land is more essential than ever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65502183406 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27485297397 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.720524017467 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.3510778813 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253343895863 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650061990787 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086588878642 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146271587407 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131889306364 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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