Young people are said to have lost many of the traditional values of the older generations.
In today's world, the traditions of the older generations seem to decline value to younger people. Personally, I believe that some of the traditions are incompatible with the ideas and attitudes of the young generation, but others are at present safeguarded because they are vital to national identity and pride in one's country.
From the one side, with the rapid development of technology, the traditional values are getting progressively overshadowed. The young, nowadays, want to live a Western lifestyle. Trendily, Teens like to wear all the fashionable clothes and try to imitate their idols, who are movie stars or popular singers. Furthermore; the rules of arranged marriages in the past have eroded when young adults assert their right to make own choices regarding who or when to marry. Obviously, the difference in relationships between old and young generations patently presents in modern families. In the modern family for example, instead of spending time on taking care of children, women can earn money to raise a family for men. It is clear that some of the traditional rules are not accepted or appropriate for the young.
From the other side, traditional values have a beneficial effect on the attitudes of young people. Politeness as well as good manners are always highly appreciated in every conservation, which is a result of earlier regulations. Children, for instance, ought to learn to respect seniors. When meeting a group of older people, children have to bow and greet the oldest first. Not only behavior but the ethnic traditions are also passed from generation to generation. The museum, built <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">by young people today, </span>considered evidence to prove that cultural preservation is important. Traditional values, in contemporary life, are actually necessary on account of being what identifies the essential character of a nation.
In conclusion, while some of the traditional values of the older generations have gradually been cleared up, many of these values have been well-preserved. To my point of view, people should take responsibility for maintaining the positive traditions such as manners, historic and cultural values and the customs as they have contributed to making the unique culture of the country and strengthening our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42817679558 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.236070826 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591160220994 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5648648328 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320647954272 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901122942508 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791695693521 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196362027766 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594292795614 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.