Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
Nowadays, human beings are thriving in the so-called technology era filled with numerous advertisements to persuade that without the utility of their products, they might be unhappy. Thus, having a life of simplicity will help people enjoy wonders around and in the local community.
As can be easily seen from the mass media under the form of marketing projects, most businesses keep telling you that you are not enough. That creates predicaments when buying this bra one will get guys or buying this car one will get girls. Never in history, human beings have ever had such an abundant and comfortable life, yet they are still suffered to a certain extent because of the notion “more and more” to be satisfied. Therefore, people are miserable when they can not get what they want. Paradoxically after getting it, they are still suffering; because life is impermanent, and things will not last.
On the other hand, people can live a happy life with much less, especially to enjoy local products and produce their own. By living simply like that, they don’t need to have luxurious products from prestigious brands to be happy. For example, not only do local food in the right land and right season not require toxic preservatives, but they also filled with tasty enzymes that are fundamental elements of a healthy life. Hence, when people stop searching for happiness far away, insiders will be benefited a lot with their benefactions, such as a local farmer.
In brief, if the reader wants to draw something from this paper, you might internalize this. Although business companies aspire people to live a life like their own and with their products, contentment is not something far away, the life around you is full of wonder and astonishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
... or buying this car one will get girls. Never in history, human beings have ever had ...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding life'?
Suggestion: the surrounding life
... contentment is not something far away, the life around you is full of wonder and astonishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in brief, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.904 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55450660598 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4274679555 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.454545455 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228960926392 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819591069643 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398016378744 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141508610684 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380372898155 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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