A lot of places rely on tourism as their main source of income unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problem if not managed correctly.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world
Do you think the benefits of tourism outweigh the drawbacks
Quite a number of places worldwide, derive the bulk of their income from tourism.Despite the fact that if not effectively managed, it could bring some disadvantages,as a whole, tourism is more beneficial.
On one hand, one of the drawbacks of tourism, is the effect it has on the country’s infrastructural facilities. Once a place is attractive to travelers, they visit in their numbers and this places a strain on the roads,electricity and water, originally suited for the locals. A study carried out by the SPC group in 2013 revealed that countries where visitors are more attracted to, had a higher cost of infrastructure maintenance.
One the other hand, tourism is the bane of a nation’s development, because it generates income for the government thereby, increasing the standard of living of the citizens. These tourists are made to pay fees and other monies for processing their travel, before they gain permission into the country .
Also, there is a high level of business activity which leads to higher revenue for the government by way of taxes and fees.
In addition, it generates employment for the citizens because new business will spring up to serve the needs of a wider variety of customers. A publication released by the New York Times in 2017, revealed that Dubai is fast becoming one of the richest economies in the world, with a high demand for labour, due to it’s increasing level of tourist activities.
To sum it up, the pros of tourism in terms of revenue generation and increase in the employment of its citizens , far outweigh the cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07224334601 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12877753172 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.3202641046 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.4 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152024578096 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614929411239 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656221754878 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835994697616 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686547421858 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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