Many adults think the childhood and schooldays are the best year's of a person's life. What's the read on do you think ? Do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that, childhood and early schooldays are the most wonderful periods of everyone's life. I agree with the notion that, it is a golden period of less stressful and less responsible life. In this essay i shall explained about the reasons in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is no doubt true that,during the childhood time they do not have stress and tension because, even if they do mistakes the parent ignore them. Moreover, parents always there to love and look after. So kids do not feel worries. Many physical and psychological stress begins once they reached to the teenage period. Children most of the time interact with their friends and busy with outdoor activities. As such on the academic point of view, only limited subjects to study. A recent study found that, around 75 percent of adult and teenagers are leading the highest stress and strain as opposed to children.
In addition to that, once a child become adult there would be much responsibilities in their life. They have to work hard to meet the basic needs. In this case children are very fortunate as they free from this as well as do not need to be tensed about financial matters. The parents are spending money for their studies, food, shelter. Besides balancing family and work is a difficult task but, children might have keep up their study and play. However, children do not required to become a leader of the family.
In conclusion, I reiterate my statement that, childhood is always a stress free an obviously less duty to do in their life. Where as teenagers and adult must no through all these hurdles and responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84341637011 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60361086359 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576512455516 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9666589426 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6111111111 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123851505882 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384354923275 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386478669789 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819010581593 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014398399084 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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