In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime?
How can we deal with those causes? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Our world is the ensemble of national peace and harmony. Even after witnessing the giant wars in the past, every citizen rightfully seeks a crime-free place to live in. But, due to certain factors, some people still urge towards committing criminal activities. In the following paragraphs, I shall delve into the causes of crime with illustrations.
Firstly, many people engage in offensive work due to their personal actions. Research shows that the younger generation is more prone to being able to do wrongdoing over others. Most people committ crime as a result of family issues like Parents separation, negligence towards children and so on which hampers the mind of a pupil. Hence, it is better to properly educate the child about criminal doings at a young age so as to avoid any mishaps.
Secondly, the grown-ups face many hurdles during the initial period of their new lives especially regarding jobs. There is no denying that a human being has to face a lots of disapprovals before finally getting a desired work. But,it is often seen that these adolescents wreak havoc when they cannot face any challenge that life throws at them. Therefore, they choose a more easy path of going in the wrong direction which includes nefarious and lawbreaking deeds. Rod is the logic of fools. Unless one is taught to catch the right train, they are willing to run on the opposite side.
Beyond any shred of doubt, it would be foolish to oversight the corrupt and questionable society that one lives in. it becomes the duty of every citizen to protect themselves and their land and break it free from such unacceptable behaviour of trespassers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, as to, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93862815884 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61538331799 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671480144404 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6684149181 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0985987292482 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027600499481 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366128004098 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548562814547 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275148792354 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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