in many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.
Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Apropos to the numerous studies conducted in 2016 globally, estimated 49% upsurge has been reported in rate of illegal activities. Which consistently are rising with the passage of time, ultimately raising the sense of terror and insecurity among citizens. The fundamental factors involved are low literacy and employment ratio, psychological issues and being in a company of culprits. In order to curtail this percentage different strategies can be implemented as discussed below.
Various key elements are responsible for excessive rise in unlawful acts. Firstly, low literacy and employment levels of a community makes it prone to financial sufferings. Secondly, enormous number of people suffer from psychological problems such as depression and anxiety. Which has profound and detrimental effects on their social and personal life. Indisputably, few follow the path of drug addiction while remaining get involved in criminal activities leading to disastrous effects on society. For example, roughly estimating about 35% of American population who are mentally distressed end up committing a serious offence.
Furthermore, a variety of strategies should be introduced globally to mitigate this issue. On the one hand, government should adopt pragmatic approaches such as fortifying rights of every human being and increasing employment opportunities. On the other hand, health organisations particularly rehabilitation centres should actively contribute by facilitating patients and motivating them to lead a healthy, happy and normal life. However, educational department in collaboration with parents should monitor a child's attitude, interests and his social activities followed by developing awareness among right and wrong paths. For instance, in my personal experience one of my classmate indulged himself in illegal actions due to his family issues and ended up being jailed.
On concluding, in my stance this is worldwide dilemma and can be tackled sensibly through collaboration of higher authorities, individuals themselves and few organisations. Although this is a time consuming task but slowly and steadily it can be achieved and hence this problem can be eradicated from our society leading to a safe and secure future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, as for, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78247734139 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1792785481 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649546827795 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7201141339 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.588235294 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108813801526 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031519027341 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324903498828 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066140165908 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323462623677 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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