in many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.
Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Write at least 250 words.
More countries are experiencing a growth in number of crimes which is taking increasingly violent forms in recent days. this essay will discuss the reasons and solutions to this grave problem.
To begin with the causes, absence of well-defined public rules and poor implementation of the laws should be one of the probable reasons for the lack of order in such societies. The countries where crime is rife often have a malfunctioning judiciary system which is unable to hold public accountable for their actions. Furthermore, the administrative authorities responsible for the public safety are often found to struggle in monitoring the rules and instill a sense of fear in the offenders and solace to the general public. The unsolved mysteries of many present criminal activities in Nepal, for example, depict the failure of the police and security departments.
As a way to solve this problem, governments should enact strict criminal laws and have efficient law enforcement mechanisms. When citizens are aware that the provisions of law guarantee punishment for an offensive act, they are more likely to become law-abiding. Moreover, forms of punishment jutted out for more serious crimes should become harsher, which will deter people from committing horrendous crimes. But all these legal efforts will not achieve desired results if the police force and courts don't cooperate to see that laws are monitored well enough for people to feel safe and secure. if few acts of crimes go unnoticed by the cops and real culprits are convicted, there will be very few situations left where anyone can be put to peril.
In conclusion, lack of severe laws which can act as deterrent and underperforming security and judicial organs of the governments are responsible for the higher crime rates. strict rules and good governance can help to solve this state of affairs in such countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19344262295 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86056132119 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583606557377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0225110421 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184113605657 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06747070699 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394440929586 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119290265357 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349838052448 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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