In many countries, the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.
Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
It has argued that criminal activities are increasing in some of the nations and the misconducts are getting powerful day by day. The reason behind this situation is mainly the lack of money with the state to provide financial support to their people, but some steps like empowerment can help those nations to solve such problems.
Poverty is the main culprit to increase in criminal activities in many nations. the need of money to feed the family and wealth required to fulfil the basic rights for an individual builds pressure on them to do wrongful activities rather than dying out in hunger. The lack in control of law and order increases the crime level, therefore which raise the questions on the safety of an individual in the nation. For instance, mostly in populous nations like India the funds with the governments are low as compared with the demands to fulfil the needs.
Although strict law and order can be one way to minimize the rise the violent wrongdoings, it will force the individual to follow rules irrespective of his wealth and needs. Another way is the growth in industrialization sector, it will increase the job opportunity for the unemployed youth and more importantly the source of income to feed the family. Daily work schedule will make youth disciplined in society and focused on their career.
In conclusion, a rise in criminal activities are the problems being faced by many nations, the reason behind such a situation is the scarcity of wealth and leakage in control of rules and regulations. Therefore providing a resource for earning money on a daily basis can prevent such situations from becoming worst.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...t criminal activities are increasing in some of the nations and the misconducts are getting...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...in criminal activities in many nations. the need of money to feed the family and we...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ge in control of rules and regulations. Therefore providing a resource for earning money ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97111913357 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71661069599 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545126353791 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.788711775 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.181818182 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144564055956 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511800409765 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036382076554 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771518662728 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161697839837 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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