In many countries, more and more people don't want to become teachers, particularly at secondary school. Why do you think the problem occurs? What could be done to tackle this problem?
Beating classmates, cheating in tests, having conflicts with teachers are happening to own to poor student behaviors because the living environment has several negative effects on students who are too young to find the ways to get away from these troubles. As a result, students are influenced perniciously in their behaviors, which makes it more important than ever for a real effort to modify the attitudes of young generations.
First of all, it would be a good option to encourage parents to spend more time on educating children. Young people be easily influenced by who gets closed with them, which could make them imitate their bad actions. For instance, when a child watches his father uses violence on others, he can become more violent, especially when it happens in school, it gets more serious. A clear solution to the problem is that parents should have a good example and be more careful with their children. They should let their children know what is right and wrong so that they could understand and behave better.
Secondly, steps should be taken in order to tackle the problem student are often lazy in the study. Many students do not be in favor of lessons or subjects they have because they are not interested in it. If we divided them into a variety of classes in many fields, it could allow children to enjoy their interesting subjects so that they would study better.
One final suggestion, which would help enormously, is that schools should set stricter rules that could change students’ attitudes, who often behave naughtily. They need to be taught as soon as possible to respect their teachers and friends as they do on themselves and how important good behaviors for their life is. Maybe, it plays a significant role in guiding children to become good and disciplined.
To sum up, there are some measures which could be taken to improve the manners’ students. If family, school, and society are ready to help, they will become helpful citizens who can contribute to build and develop the community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: gets
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Suggestion: behavior
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97345132743 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5549128783 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566371681416 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5403261357 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193916770891 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685885971418 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382184201021 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102894729639 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522356963807 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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