Traffic jams are becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Effort has been made to cope with it, for example, the construction of new bridges, the situation seems not to change much.
Write an essay to discuss the causes of traffic jams and suggest some sulutions.
Traffic congestion is one of the most serious trouble are facing now in many countries, especially for major cities. A number of solutions are given to clear it, for instance, many new bridges and highway are urgently built, but maybe they are not useful. In this essay, I will dissect some causes result in traffic jams and then give some suggestions to tackle it.
First of all, there are too many private means of transportation are using now that is the most main reason causes traffic jams. Take Vietnam for example, the population of Vietnam now is nearly 100 million people and almost every adult has their private motorbike or car at least one or even more. As a consequence, the more private means were used, the more serious the traffic problem is. Secondly, there are a little public transportations for serving a number of people’s demands for moving from place to place. Although the development of contemporary society brings much wealth to countries, there was a truth that it still has many countries that could not afford enough public transportations for their own moving demands. Finally, the limitation in investing facilities due to the poor budget of a lot of developing countries also makes the situation in congestion worse and worse.
Moving now on solutions to solve this matter. First and foremost, the government should pass the law about limitations in private means of transportation. The government should set high taxes in cars, motorbikes, or other means to decrease the number of this. Encouraging people to use more public services like buses, trains, and so on, instead. Furthermore, divide the main area, especially in the big cities for easily control at peak time. Finally, forming some finance organizations for building facilities in which priority for highway, bypass, railway, and so on.
All things considered, traffic congestion is a common problem for each individual, government, country, and for the whole world, therefore, we need to join hands together to put forward this trouble as soon as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 338, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun suggestion seems to be countable; consider using: 'several suggestions'.
Suggestion: several suggestions
...es result in traffic jams and then give several suggestion to tackle it. First of all, there ar...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'transportation'?
Suggestion: transportation
...is. Secondly, there are a little public transportations for serving a huge people’s demand of m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, at least, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16463414634 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77022603596 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0319648633 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.875 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244404216941 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721112511762 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058462779367 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15148606641 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733924036758 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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