In many countries, women’s are allowed to take maternity leave during the first month after the birth of the newborn.
Do you think advantages of maternity leave outweigh the disadvantages?
Giving birth to a new life is not a cup of tea. Females got a chance to take prenatal holidays for 30 or more days according to particular country or company. There are some merits as well as demerits to take paternal leave, what are those? Well, I’ll explain it in below paragraphs.
On the one hand, what are the strong points of these vacations? Extensively, first, at that time and post delivery women suffer a lot physically and mentally, these days off give her time to regain her energy and nurture her baby. To illustrate this, due to blood loss during childbirth, she is not able to stand or concentrate on her chores; weakness is common and immune system is compromised. In addition, neonates will not be deprived by mother feed which contain all the essential nutrients to make her baby immunologically fit, as she is on his/her side to take care of him for example, giving him bath, changes his clothes, massage his body and able to feed him whenever he awakes.
On the other hand, which false factors contribute for staycation? To start with, as to obey the rules, some companies deduct the salary if any employee take child care leave. In this consequence, she will not be able to meet her family ends besides, she is the only earning person in her home. Furthermore, to play a role as single parent, it will be difficult to grow up new born without having money as the expenses raise in terms of baby milk, diapers, clothes etc.
In essence, although applying for post delivery leave are helpful in many ways to nurture the baby and for mom to snooze herself, there are some demerits like unpaid leave that could restrain her to support her family. Its between a rock and a hard place to take leave after childbirth.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wakes. On the other hand, which false factors contribute for staycation? To st...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her home. Furthermore, to play a role as single parent, it will be difficult to g...
^^
Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...uld restrain her to support her family. Its between a rock and a hard place to take...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, as well as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62903225806 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49600930186 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609677419355 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.695438026 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100527585047 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352379939363 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431494254932 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683516090286 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541893257234 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wakes. On the other hand, which false factors contribute for staycation? To st...
^^
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her home. Furthermore, to play a role as single parent, it will be difficult to g...
^^
Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...uld restrain her to support her family. Its between a rock and a hard place to take...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, as well as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62903225806 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49600930186 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609677419355 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.695438026 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100527585047 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352379939363 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431494254932 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683516090286 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541893257234 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.