In many countries, young people move to cities leaving their homes in rural areas for work or study.
i-What do you think are the reasons for it?
ii- Do you think advantages for moving to cities outweigh the disadvantages.
Countries around the world are now faced with a situation whereby young people living in rural areas leave their homes to the city for work or study. In my opinion, I think this is more beneficial compared to any problem it might bring.
Despite the drawbacks below, I believe the experience and other benefits to be acquired by young people are extremely useful for their future. Firstly, the youth get to enjoy quality education with better facilities than in the rural areas and also good employment opportunities, which result to better living standards of the young people. Secondly, when young people live separately from their family, they learn how to become self-reliant and make decisions independently as most of their tasks are carried out by their parents. Moreover, when they live far away they learn well on time management, doing of house chores, paying of bills and so on. Also, it helps them to value money and cultivate the habit of saving which is a good quality that would be useful in adulthood. In addition, they would make new friends and learn about diverse customs and cultures.
On the other hand, despite the advantages above, the negative consequences of this trend should also be considered. One potentially dangerous problem is that when they live alone in the city they sometimes feel homesick due to the various responsibilities they have to take. This perhaps leads them to feel isolated especially in the first few months after moving and if they do not find a way to get rid of that it can lead to depression. In addition, they are often not mature enough to avoid making friends with people who might influence them negatively and teach them bad habits such as, smoking, drug abuse and other criminal activities. Thus, such habits would definitely affect them in their place of work or study.
In conclusion, the benefits of living independently and make decisions by themselves will be beneficial for them as adults and these clearly outweigh any disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96726190476 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65917414411 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.854390586 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.214285714 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204195469826 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677984175564 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767475212637 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140987216937 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813973713668 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.