Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this happen? What can the government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
In recent times people now produce more waste product. However, this essay will discuss the causes and proffer possible solutions.
To begin, several factors have contributed to producing of rubbish. The most important factor is high number of various productions. Today, companies manufacture a large amount of goods and it is easy for people to have variety of those. In addition, individuals go shopping without shopping bags because they know one will always be given to them irrespective of the number of times they visit the store. Thus, garbage product will continue to increase because a large number of individuals do not re-use materials. For instance, for all items purchased in a grocery store a plastic bag is being given. Therefore, most household has a large number of plastic bags to dispose frequently. Furthermore, sub-standard items are produced by manufacturing enterprises, which cannot be used for a long period of time. As a result, such items are often thrown away.
However, there are numerous steps which the government can adopt to alleviate this condition. Firstly, government educating its citizens the importance of re-using plastic bags or replace them with reusable paper bags for shopping. Secondly, producing recycle bin and placing them in strategic areas in a community where packs can be dropped and money incentives given for a specified number of packs brought. As a consequence, people will be more conscious of how they discard this bag. Lastly, enforcing strict laws for manufacturing firms to follow, to ensure that goods produced are of good quality and can be used for a reasonable amount of time. Hence, level of waste items would be reduced to a minimal level.
In conclusion, it is no doubt that the level of waste produce is increasing due to various reasons. However, with awareness campaigns on reusing and recycling practices, laws to ensure durable goods are produced will help curb the number of rubbish produced.
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...numerous steps which the government can adopt to alleviate this condition. Firstly, gove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18495297806 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7875936494 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570532915361 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7430110234 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0526315789 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63157894737 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177607088258 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557587528601 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508632304385 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119755715613 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279771464375 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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