Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Although it is widely believed that studying a foreign language at first year of school is more effective than in secondary school for children. In my opinion, I think learning a second language at the early years has more benefits compared to any problem it might bring.
Despite the drawbacks below, I believe the benefits gained by children who have the ability to be able to communicate effortlessly with many different languages are extremely useful for their future. Firstly, learning a second language at a young age is easier to understand and it also requires less time than learning at adolescence. Children could pick up pronunciations more easily as they learn sub-consciously. Secondly, teaching them a different language has a positive impact on their personality as it broadens their horizon and improves their social skills in interacting with people from other countries. Moreover, it exposes them to a wide range of cultures, lifestyle and traditions of another country. Finally, in the future, they will gain from being able to communicate in a second language in their studies and work career especially nowadays where public organisations and multinational companies such as airports, Embassy and Telecommunications prefer to have employees who are bilingual working for them.
Nevertheless, despite the advantages above, children could face some setbacks from learning another language at primary school instead of secondary. One of such problem, is that it could affect their ability to learn their mother’s tongue properly due to learning many languages with different dictions and grammar at the same time. Another negative aspect, it is regarded a waste of time when their study time could be spent on core subjects namely mathematics, science etc. Finally, due to the number of subjects taught in school learning different lingua franca makes the workload extremely much for such young children which are paid for with their fun time.
In conclusion, considering the easy in learning and the benefits in adulthood for children who learn a foreign language in early years far outweighs any minor problem it could have.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33823529412 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92721834963 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538235294118 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8926871322 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.615384615 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289138523409 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118605109765 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110759305236 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20416748208 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676331663312 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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