Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the cause of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
It is most often noticed that most of the offenders are more likely to re-offend after getting demission from the jail. There are several reasons attributed to this behavior and ways to sort these issues are discussed in the consequent paragraphs.
To begin with, firstly, they get negatively influenced by the hard-core gangsters and criminals, instead of assisting them in becoming decent citizens. This is because a convicted person communicates with these gangsters who them, the more sophisticated ways of doing illegal actions. Additionally, the rude environment of the prison is also responsible for the change in the character of the person. Furthermore, after being released from jail they are less likely to be accepted by any employer for job, hence, left with no money and poverty which encourages them to re-commit the crime. For instance, a recent study in South India explained that around 76 percent of pocket pickers become murders after serving a prison sentence.
There are different ways for solving this problem such as the government should start vocational training programs in the prison which would help the people to grab the job after their release from prison. Furthermore, proper rehabilitation programs should be there and government authorities should have a regular check on the activities of the individual who is released from jail, in order, to make him less prone to crimes. For instance, the rehabilitation program started by the Indian government has given shocking result by lowering down the crime by 48 percent after proper rehabilitation of the released criminals.
To conclude, there are several reasons for re-committing crime after leaving prison such as lack of job, money, or environment prevailing in the prison. However, this issue can be solved by initiating vocational programs and rehabilitation programs which can reduce crime at a higher level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36666666667 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90475472286 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563333333333 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.4286702231 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.166666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148369821718 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562601823342 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326933057664 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927793735867 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362453850493 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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