Nowadays, most countries are facing the problem of criminals committing after being released from jail. Each year a lot of money is spent on this problem and no unique solution has been found for it so far.
At first, based on new researches criminals are not skillful as much as they should be when they leave the prison. for example they don't know any crafts or are not fit to start or engage in a good job. In most situations they are illiterate and poor and live in areas with high crime rate. So after a short time they have to commit crime to earn enough money.
Secondly, as all of us know in all societies criminals are humiliated and looked up on with heat because of their fault and this has negative effects on criminals' personality and they feel that they should revenge their society and this feeling leads to committing more crime.
As I mentioned before there is not single way to tackle this problem. Some people believe that we should decrease crime rate as a whole and in all the world poverty is the base of crimes and we should try to eliminate it to decrease the crime rate.
Some people believe that alongside with the decrease of crime rate we should teach skills like working computer, carving, carpentry, welding and so on to criminals during imprisonment. If they become skilled people they can find a suitable job after they are released.
All researches emphasis on that we need some NGOs to communicate with criminals after jail and protect and help them in society. they can provide a periodic health check and send the criminals to psychologists if they need one and many other types of help.
To sum up, criminals are not skillful people and they are rejected by the society because of their fault and they need to be taught to become skillful to find suitable jobs and there is a NGOs' help as that they live in areas with high crime rate and low income.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eels lead to they start crime again. As we mentioned before there are not uniqu...
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Line 10, column 136, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'Those cans'?
Suggestion: This can; Those cans
...l and protect and help them in society. Those can provide a periodic health check, sendin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, in most cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73602484472 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3366526494 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490683229814 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6078513891 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.083333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174606399182 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735101887872 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326778882177 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094433777748 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176280560355 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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