Many developing countries are expanding their tourist industries.
Why is this?
Is this a positive development?
A number of developing nations are encouraging the growth of their tourist industries, as they need to boost their economy and promote their culture. In my opinion, this is a positive development, as it provides employment, encourages local industries, and promotes a deeper cultural understanding.
Developing nations often struggle to provide basic civic amenities due to a shortage of resources, or a variety of infrastructural issues. They may not possess any bankable natural resources such as oil, coal, etc. or the methods to fully utilize them. Also, issues in governance often lead to unstable economies and a lack of opportunities for growth. This, in turn, inhibits the ability of citizens to improve their quality of life.
The growth of the tourism industry in a developing nation would give a highly desirable boost to their economy, as well as highlight the culture of nation. Thus, investment in local handicrafts industries, such as souvenirs, provides employment to artisans and skilled workers, as well as work in various parts of hospitality industry. It also promotes the development of infrastructural amenities like transportation and sanitation. The influx of tourists would also promote an exchange of cultures. There may be some pre-existing prejudices or stereotypes associated with a particular country, which could be clarified with exposure. Many people love to explore the rituals, values and lifestyles of various cultures, and this could be highlighted with the help of social media.
In conclusion, a number of developing countries are expanding their tourism industries, as they need new avenues for revenue in order to better the quality of life of their citizens. It is a positive development, as it provides employment to various industries, as well as engendering a broader understanding of the country’s culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47916666667 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24391048688 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548611111111 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1028370646 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289404543185 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803475990587 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698337609355 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174051805519 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495477633086 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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