Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people?
Opinions are divided on why museums and ancient sites are majorly visited by non-natives. I believe that lack of interest could be the cause for indigenous people, and the solution lies in the hands of the government.
Local visitors are not attracted to art galleries and historical buildings for reasons which relate to lack of interest and wastage of their hard-earned money on it. With regard to the former, the native population is least interested in visiting such local sites as they are already familiar with their culture and history and perhaps have nothing new to discover by visiting the same museum repeatedly; therefore, they avoid visiting these places as they consider such visits a waste of time. In contrast, foreigners are keen to visit these places as it will help them to have a better understanding of the history and culture of the countries they are visiting. As for the money, entry fees of these ancient buildings are on the higher side, which discourages local people to visit them. Instead of squandering their hard-earned money on visiting museums again, one would love to spend it on food and other activities, such as movies and visiting other places of attractions.
Encouraging local people and providing discounts on entry tickets offer the best chance of attracting natives to museums and historical sites. As far as motivation is concerned, the local authorities could organize various types of exhibitions, such as arts and drawing competitions at these places to provide members of the local society with a new experience every time they visit them. Another solution would be offering free tickets and discounts at the weekends so that low-income and middle-income families can visit. For instance, schools can provide assignments related to the history of a country, and this will motivate parents to take their children to the historical museums to collect useful information which will help them excel in their studies.
In conclusion, local people do not enjoy visiting museums or historical places because there is not much they can learn from these places. Tourists, on the other hand, are curious to learn more and more about their destinations and hence they make it a point to visit these places. The government can encourage more natives to visit by conducting interesting programs like exhibitions at these places and offering free or subsidized entry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, therefore, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16624040921 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74202673786 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496163682864 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6915968516 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.285714286 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9285714286 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278565242544 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108091343759 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718681630656 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173671784444 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382353730687 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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