Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to people outweigh the disadvantages?
Museums not only preserve but also represent the traditional culture of the country. Visiting to museum is very interesting and informative. Folks come to know about their ancestors' life style, culture, tastes, social life and many more. An entry fee to these museums , at the same time, can be beneficial and discouraging too. I shall discuss my views in the upcoming paragraphs.
To initiate with, if people are charged an entry fee to museums that means they are giving their small share to keep the ancestral belongings intact for the next generation. It gives them a sense of duty towards their culture. Moreover, sometimes, the funds given by the government are not adequate for the maintenance of them. Additionally, putting an entry fee means there will not be an unnecessary crowd of people. Only those who are actually interested to know the history and various artifacts will be the visitors.
On the contrary, charging an admission fee would be discouraging for a particular group of people like students, the poor families who are interested to get to know their past. Youngsters, then, prefer to spend money on watching movies and going to picnic spots. This means that the purpose of maintaining the museums will be defeated. On the top of it, usually tourists do not like to pay to get an entry into it. Besides this, it is entirely government's duty to grant sufficient funds for the overall maintenance of these; as the citizens are already paying enormous amount of taxes.
To crown it all, museums are meant for public. Government should provide required funds to the authorities so that the common man can make the best use of it. A free entry would , definitely, attract many visitors especially students and tourists. Government's motive should not be to make money out of it rather to make sure that people are aware of their history and various historical figures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, then, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95911949686 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70945789954 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575471698113 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7075876978 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184538524424 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500898909391 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592138910334 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107322683275 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359508318497 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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