Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behavior. What is your opinion?

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behavior. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, the trend of watching television and playing computer games is increasing by leaps and bounds. Often games are designed and shows are made based on viiolent themes. A huge chunk of viewers and gamers are of opinion that these themes have consequences on the minds of people , especially, youngsters. On the other hand, some believe that these are mere source of entertainment.

Firstly, television shows and computer games are stress busters. People of almost every age group love to stick to either of these two. Gradually they start loving and imitating these characters. Secondly, some aggressive attacks , for instance, kidnapping of a child to seek ransom, agitations, family conflicts, hunfer strikes to protest against government's policies are shown as brave acts, so people start copying all these kinds of deeds. They learn myriad loopholes about how to grind their own axes.

On the flip side, some people have altogether different views. They believe that all these brave acts help them to be aware about societal issues and how to defend themselves if caught in such riots. Also, by playing such games, one can easily vent out one's frustration and anger without harming anybody. Moreover, how an individual or a group of people behave in the society, depends largely upon their education, family background and their moral values.

Bringing up rear, aggressive shows are telecasted just to warn people with the consequences of these acts. Viewers should criticize these shameful acts rather than imitating them. Games are also designed just to entertain people and to channelize their energy in a positive way. An individual should give a thought before indulging into any misconduct.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29304029304 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61561490329 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6336996337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3284497854 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265382458427 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801607311786 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530029358323 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16008334298 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532161355936 0.056905535591 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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