Many museums charge for admission, while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions tomuseums outweigh the disadvantages?

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Many museums charge for admission, while others are free.

Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to

museums outweigh the disadvantages?

It is contentious whether museums should have entry fees or not. In my opinion, although there is a merit of improvement in services if they charge fees, the demerit of discouragements to students and tourists will supersede the benefits.

To embark upon, it is clear that charging for admission would give a source of income to museums. They could utilize the funds for the betterment of their services and improve their display units. Museums in China, for instance, charge some entry fees and expend the money in installing the latest audio-visual technologies to make their exhibitions more interactive and attractive. However, this essay would argue that instead of charging the same from the public, the government and corporate should sponsor the museums.

Despite the above advantage, there are some serious disadvantages which cannot be ignored. Entry tickets to the museum would discourage our youth from the important heritage of the nation. Students hardly have some money, and if they need to pay for entry to museums, they would rather prefer not to visit. Moreover, foreign tourists would also not consider visiting these places instead they would like to spend money on some exotic locations such as mountains, beaches, and deserts. To illustrate, the Heritage Museum of Kolkata, when started charging for entry in 2018, the number of foreign visitors reduced by 21 % in the year.

In conclusion, the superior technology and better services are the advantages if museums charge fees. However, I believe that the limitations of hampering eagerness among youngsters, and the reduction of international visitors are far more effective than its benefits.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77953155348 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0283295209 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195605048748 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075079979687 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610051678551 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115539764626 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488396385491 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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