Life was better when technology was simpler.
To what extent do you agree and disagree?
It is fair to say that the life of people was superior when there were no high tech machines. I undoubtedly agree with this notion as technology is the prime reason of increased tiredness and stress levels of people and taking them towards a sedentary lifestyle.
Equipment and devices of twenty-first century killed the relaxing time of people and raised their stress. In other words, everyone becomes addicted to mobile phones and the internet. This addiction is taking away time for relaxation and elevating tension levels. The survey of the World Health Organization, to illustrate, stated that more than forty-two percent of people sleep late at night due to addiction towards social media and confronting problems of sleep deprivation and anxiety. Had these types of platforms not invented, people could have lived a relaxed and healthy life.
Moreover, technology played the most evident role in making people couch potato and consequently unhealthy. They now prefer to do all the work through computers and machines by sitting on a chair, which is leading to massive physical inactivity among them. This is making them obese and becomes a reason for several deadly diseases. As per the report of the United States health department, more than seventy percent of employments now in the country are sitting jobs, which was only twenty percent in the nineties. This is a major reason for increased obesity in the country.
To conclude, it is clear that the life of people was finer when there were no smartphones and computers because the evolution of technology has brought various mental and physical health complications and turn us towards an unhealthy style of living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15867158672 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67400656957 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605166051661 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2499723784 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.538461538 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136268145933 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433640702599 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568367161848 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985074944562 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628027645259 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.