Many people are working at home rather than in the workplace. Some people believe this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others suggest it will cause stress in the home. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Work from home is becoming common in our society these days. Some are preferring to work from home instead of going to an outdoor office. A significant number of people believe that this trend profits to the employees and their families. However, others argue that it causes strain in the house environment. In this essay, both views will be discussed followed by an opinion.
On the one side, the biggest advantage of working from home is all the duties are performed according to the employee’s willingness. The employee can facilitate its priorities to perform a task without any pressure and in the midst can spend the spear time with family members. In addition to that, a comfort zone is also an advantage in this type of job, in which a person does not require to follow duty hours on a daily basis. He or she can start their work at any time according to their interest and convenience.
On the other side, jobs at home enhance the mixture of personal and professional which sometimes become difficult and annoying for the person as well as for their family members, especially for those who lack management skills. Performing home duties and work simultaneously can trouble a family relationship of worker with other members of the house. Hence performing a task at home should be chosen carefully.
In summary, home jobs are quite popular these days as it benefits the employee in numerous ways although there are some drawbacks such as adverse effects on family bonding and some efforts are required to minimize these negative side by segregating home and work tasks. Hence, I believe that work from home is way more beneficial for the employee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... common in our society these days. Some are preferring to work from home instead of going to a...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'following'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: following
...job, in which a person does not require to follow duty hours on a daily basis. He or she ...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...worker with other members of the house. Hence performing a task at home should be cho...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ask at home should be chosen carefully. In summary, home jobs are quite popular ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, well, as for, in addition, in summary, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90459363958 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67670585066 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7850536711 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308371961326 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105168360926 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528476158455 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186773501734 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083863477596 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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