Many people argue that society is becoming less and less polite. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, many people are becoming ill-mannered towards others. This essay agrees with this statement because technology has affected the minds of people negatively, and an obsession with earning a lot of money has made people less respectful of each other.
With the advent of technology, we are facing psychological issues that hinder us from being polite to others. These days, many people use social media, like Facebook and Twitter, where they see their friends' status flaunting of different things. For instance, whenever anyone buys something expensive, like a new mobile phone or a car, he or she updates their status. Consequently, this makes their friends jealous, and they start thinking about how they can compete with them, thus affecting their psychology negatively. This negative feeling of jealousy ultimately makes them less respectful.
Another reason for becoming less polite is the focus on ways to become wealthy. This is because life is becoming hard; and to live comfortably, we need big money. Many people have a workaholic nature because they think that they need to think about their work if they want to become a rich person. Due to this reason, they do not even bother to talk to other people around them politely. For example, I saw my colleague last month who spoke to me very rudely when I tried to have a conversation with him because he was doing his work.
In conclusion, I agree that people are becoming impolite because a sense of competition due to technology and the desire to have an enormous amount of money have adverse effects on human psychology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18050541516 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.02985357163 2.80592935109 215% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613718411552 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8135084633 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.692307692 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110967848869 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475406998728 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02281227157 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0341444774789 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271614667131 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.56 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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