Multi-national companies are mushrooming globally. Some individuals opine that these prominent organizations should contribute towards the welfare of the social community, rather than just making money. I strongly agree with this statement, and it is discussed further in underlying paragraphs.
Firstly, these big industries make lots of money. Some parts of the financial gains of the companies should be used in development of the rural region by making contributions to the school and hospital infrastructures. On the other hand, these companies should also contribute to social awareness. Flyers and banners that encourage cleanliness, especially in rural areas of India, is a beneficial effort. Organizing events for promulgating education for young children and demotivating child labor is some essential information to be fed to the uneducated throng of the destitute region.
Generally, the land used for the construction of such a vast set-up is a property of a villager, who receives a hefty sum of money but would lose his livelihood, which he earned from that piece of land. It becomes the responsibility of the business owners to provide their input in their financial wellbeing. However, the company could offer a job to someone related to the person contributing his share for the establishment of a big industry. For instance, Alembic Pharmaceuticals runs a CSR foundation, which enrolls people from the nearby village to cook food for their employees, employing many people in that area.
In conclusion, in place of just making money, the top-notch companies should remember to help in improving the lives of the social community surrounding it. Prominent entrepreneurs in business and stakeholders should consider the opportunities to help these people in need of the hour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48920863309 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23784969038 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60071942446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8673769312 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172167850893 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534765223461 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317818699886 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972608181829 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024080086836 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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