Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children.
To what extent do you agree?
Globally it is widely being suggested that extensive media coverage of celebrities is negatively influencing children's minds and their outlook towards life.
Pre teenage years up until their late teens is a time where attitude and perception can make a lasting impression.
This can be detrimental in their journey of life. With this in mind, I largely agree to the topic's view that media houses have a negative effect on children.
This essay will discuss the negative aspects of media coverage on celebrities.
For example 2 events were covered live by two reputed media houses last week. They showcased the unruly and rowdy behaviour
of a prominent football player from the Indian premier league.The player in question used his influence and clout to barge
into a restaurant even though it was full. He behaved as if it was his right to gain access since he was a super star.
Another recent example was of a popular Indian film star who was boasting on television that he organised a hunting expedition
in a protected forest for endangered deers.This celebrity even had the gaul and gumption to declare that he shot a deer.
These acts do not bode well and will affect the thinking of young children. They may well tend to believe that they too can
get away with anything without any scant regard of the law.
To conclude yes it is unfortunate that overall media coverage does have a negative effect on children.
However, all is not lost as there are a few responsible media houses who report largely on celebrities who behave and use their fame and fortune wisely.
Media houses must have internal policies that are focused on promoting positive deeds of celebrities that showcase positivity and good human values.
which hopefully will translate into a positive impact on children's minds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00660066007 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58749242249 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2412716993 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.133333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251059218693 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881470262787 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976466495556 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815012638117 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906713753388 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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