Many people believe that public facilities for e.g, zoos, museums, parks should
be free. Other people think that you should pay to use facilities. Discuss both
views and give your opinion.
In this concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that for the betterment of society there should be parks, museum, zoos. Some people concur that the visiting these places should be free of cost. However, I quibble from them and propound that it should be designed according to economic status of the country. This essay will further elaborate my reasons for the same in my upcoming paragraphs which will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are adequate evidence of this view which are substantial. The top-notch concrete reason is by implementing no entry fees, people can have more conditions to entertain and have a place to relax. Another pivotal aspect is public places often attract many residents to visit. The rearmost coherent factor to be considered which cannot be neglected is people are always interested in the things that are free it will makes people visiting theses places by feeling more comfortable and not thinking about the price of the ticket entrance. Thus, it is clear that it has certainly undeniable merits.
What is half full for some, may appear half empty to others. So, people in general tend to distinguish that paying for visiting these places which has multifarious reasons. To commence with, some people deem that by collecting money these places will be maintained. Withal tourist attraction always increases when it is paid they also uphold that justify it beautification and changes can be made when there is some entry fee.
To culminate, I reiterate that there are plenty of strong factors supporting paying money to visiting these places can discipline the environment which will help to maintain the infrastructure of zoo, museums and park. However, contrary cannot be overlooked either.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...ted in the things that are free it will makes people visiting theses places by feelin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, thus, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17021276596 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67765955099 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570921985816 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6361284155 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220150851749 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735064534338 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555226792042 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132482437397 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393573523787 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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