Many People Believe That Social Networking Sites Have A Huge Negative Impact On Both Individuals And Society
social networking sites like Facebook are most famous networking site among the multitude. Person vacant their time to use the website. However these sites has their own merits and demerits, despite the use of people vary. In this contrast a fair amount of people believe that usage of such site have more negative impact on the other hand some convinced, it is a great way to connect with companion and the world.
To embark on, I would say Facebook also consider as a origin of marketing, advertisement and to form a group of friends. people share the detail of missing person, and a large number of people from different region shared the post , and it prove helpful to trace the person.For example a few months back, a child was kidnapped outside his home, cctv footage was shared on site and it proved a great help to police.
To continue with some people create small business ideas and group on social sites to market their business and product. people create group where people can join the group of their interest. individual can also view their old reminiscence. For example Facebook remind people about their journey, moments, birthday, anniversary and many more. most people forget their relative or friend birthday. Facebook remind them about the upcoming birthday of months.
on the basis of above scenario, I would say social networking sites are a good source to connect with people and to share the group of same interest., celebrations and to help the needed people.Everything has two sides. positive and negative, it's up to us How we take the things and personal perception always vary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94160583942 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57614228856 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6938275017 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7142857143 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254240508459 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795205286646 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715285787439 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145513399133 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883023311178 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.