Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.
Do you agree or disagree?
Several factors support this argument that television is not only one reason that dominates the free time. Technology has provided number of assets to keep multitude busy in their own and prevent them being a social animal. I strongly disagree with this statement that television dominates the free time. In this illuminate. first I will give the information about the many gadgets that are available in market apart from television who occupy a person in its own world.
Latest technology pay an essential role in this argument also internet is the another reason people not indulge in social gathering even after being a part of it. For example, social networking sites like Facebook, instagram and whtsapp are such web site which are used by youth by great interest.On the other hand if talk about television, technology has given an immense boost to its demands as well. Now in market multiple options like smart television is available. It make individual life more busy to play their favorite movie or games in just a click in addition internet provide discount option on it.
Another factor to embark on it, person's hectic life schedule. All week they totally indulge in their work life, moreover when they get free time they don't prefer to go out. Holiday means relax day to them. In spite of that they didn't get much time to meet with their friend and society mates. For example in metro city number of people even don't know who is leaving next to door. They feel comfortable in their own circle and feel insure and unsafe to accomapny other people.
to summarize all the above mention fact, I would say not only television is reason for preventing people from bring a social animal, However other factors are also the cause of this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, in addition, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36502290334 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606666666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5120399545 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187597726233 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629726334003 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700825112827 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115180748359 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076724730746 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.