Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.
Do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary era,there is an intense argument over the issue that most people prefer watching television during their leisure time than doing better productive activities.A lion's share of society favors it, however the rest averse it.This essay disagrees with the notion that spending time watching television makes people lazy and prevents them from interacting with family and friends.
Firstly,television is one of the main media for entertainment and information.People watch a variety of programs according to their interest which entertains and makes them happy.Watching television helps us stay updated with all the latest technology and news about what's happening around the world.I enjoy watching the National Geographic channel when I get time as it keeps me informed about science and wildlife. Another example is that children watch cartoons like Tom and Jerry when they take a break from studies as it refreshes their body and minds.It is often seen that family and friends get together to watch their favorite movies or shows which also helps to create a stronger bond.
Secondly,most people are living a very busy and hectic schedule.They hardly get time for the daily chores and other activities.Moreover,these days people are so stressed out because of the tension and pressure they face from work or elsewhere and hence most people tend to watch television to get themselves relaxed and to free their minds from all problems and worries.For example,it is often seen that people after coming back from work watch television while having their food.
All the above assertions lead to the conclusion that watching television during leisure time not only provides entertainment and information but also helps people to relax their minds from busy and stress-full lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42704626335 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04706561425 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597864768683 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.1864855372 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 305.0 106.682146367 286% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.2 20.7667163134 271% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.4 7.06120827912 275% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219134270333 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127271421242 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823563376094 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149116776273 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729208783854 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.2 13.0946893788 246% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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