Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.
Do you agree or disagree?
Television is a great source of entertainment to us but addiction of this has adverse ramifications. In recent times, watching television is the prime activity to many individual to enjoy their leisure period. This essay agrees that, spending too much time in front of television makes us lethargic and unsocial.
Firstly, apathy to work is overwhelmingly increasing in today’s people because of this entertaining device. Though everybody watch television, women are in maximum number who prefer television to other activities for off time. This phenomenon makes our physics unfit and lead us to different type of disease like hypertension, heart problems etc. For example, a recent poll by the government of Bangladesh found that 80% women of total population daily spend around 5 hours by watching drama serials.
Another dangerous effect is the young children are staying at home at free time rather than meeting and playing with others at outside. As a result, social bonding has becoming vulnerable which will effect on their career later. Boys and girls are watching their favorite movie or TV show but they are forgetting how to behave with others in real life. For instance, in Dhaka there had been more social events and contest before availability of television but now it has been reduced by 60% because children prefer to watch television instead of taking parts in social programs.
In conclusion, obviously television has added a new dimension to our life but nothing excessive is good for us. People should be more conscious about negative impacts of being addicted to TV and utilize their extra time in fruitful tasks which are beneficial to health and career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20146520147 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78460083279 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652014652015 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6295697431 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.230769231 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140869192077 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478022082472 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418497058843 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852890976354 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403687727042 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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