Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past. Why is this the case? Is it a negative or positive development?
It is a general notion that taking care of our environment is essential so that the younger generations will be able to live a happy and a healthy life however, humans do not often take any measures to safeguard the earth.
In this fast pacing world with high technological advancements people are often busy leading a hectic and a busy life. they are lazy and do not spare time to see and understand that resources are getting depleted and how mother nature is getting ruined. In fact, people are more interested in spending time with friends and family or socializing through social networking sites. In spite of knowing the dangers involved in damaging the environment ,humans do not take adequate steps and efforts to protect their surroundings. they just take advantage of the fact that no matter what we do, nothing is going to happen to our surroundings and simply run away from taking essential responsibilities to safeguard the earth.
people should encouraged to protect the environment to prevent further damage. There are several ways to motivate people to keep the surroundings safe and pure. Firstly, people need to be aware of the consequences involved in disturbing nature through television documentary programs or by publishing articles in the newspapers. Media can definitely motivate and inspire people to protect the environment. I think children must be taught how to take care of earth right from elementary.This could be done by celebrating world environment day, cleaning beaches and park etc. this will definitely be a lesson for the adults and thus they can help to save and protect mother nature. The govenment must enforce strict laws to protect envvironment.Anyone violating the law must be given a severe penality. This way people will definite take an effort and responsibility in protecting the environment.
Last but not the least, its rightly said that every action has an equal and opposite reactions. our actions decides the fate of the place we live in. Hence we must take effective measures and encourage others to safe guard the environment so that we can live in a healthy and peaceful environment.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09631728045 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96723244406 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552407932011 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3054043897 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.823529412 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0242169020205 0.244688304435 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00901987588943 0.084324248473 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0163475506641 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0120882595624 0.151304729494 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123644512834 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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