Technology has become an integral part of work life. There are people who argue that it has a lot of advantages. Others, however, argue that its disadvantages outweigh the advantages. This essay will discuss both the views and provide concluding remarks.
On the one hand, those who support the positive impact of the technology argue that it enhances the productivity of the employee, which enables the companies to reap the benefits in terms of profit. This may lead to better remuneration for the employees. In addition, Technology can be helpful in reducing the monotonous work being performed by employees, so that employees experience lower stress levels and better job satisfaction. For example, tedious jobs like daily manual checks can be automated using technology, and employees can utilize their time to more skill-intensive jobs.
On the another hand, those who oppose the use of technology point out that companies are primarily employing technology to reduce the number of labors. This may lead to a higher unemployment rate. Examples can be seen in the finance and banking industries where a lot of employees have been replaced by technology with the use of machine learning and artificial intelligence. Finally, Technology can make employees too much dependent on it, which can reduce their ability to work without its assistance. For example, as calculators have become quite common in business, employees’ ability to do the calculation on their own have decreased significantly.
In conclusion, Although technology has several drawbacks, its advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Technology should be used for employee benefit to increase the throughput of employees as well as the betterment of the company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45555555556 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12064016858 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2299391632 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154963665058 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549258074004 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308575626561 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101229639858 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184184776924 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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